[한국의 몰입교육]에 관해서 영작을 해본 건데요.

특히 단복"수"에 엄청 약하고 아직도 한글-> 영어를 바로 영작하는 한글식 사고를 아주 많이 갖고 있는 것 같아요

계속 영어로 생각하면서 글을 쓰려는 노력이 필요 한 것 같습니다.

Immersion program of Korea.

There is 'Immersion program' which is one of the teaching methods where you can freely write and speak what you think in English.

This program has come from Canada in 1906's and a tried and true teaching method. This is a way to teach multiple subjects in English such as social studies and science.

Through immersion program, children learn parts in English they're usually interested in.
There're upsides considering you can acquire information and acknowledge other than English.

In Korea, immersion program has been running in mostly private elementary schools and international middle and high schools and so on. In private institutes, they collaborate the program with foreign publishing company.

As a great example, teaching company, The Education, works together with Scholastic which is one of the biggest publishing companies for children's books and published Harry potter and hunger games and so on.
They're running English program like this at 30 branches of private institutes nationwide.

The class books of the English program The Education showed are not just about simple grammar or listening but about various subjects such as space science, society, history, economics and arts.

Shane Armstrong, CEO of Scholastic, explained kids don't use English books compiled by teacher, they read books written by worldwide well-known writers.

Through it, they pick up vocabularies and expression naturally and get a change to consciously think about main point writers want to talk about.

Immersion program of Korea.

There is an 'Immersion program' which is one of the teaching methods where you can freely write and speak what you think in English. This program came from Canada in the 1906's and is a tried-and-true teaching method. This is a way to teach multiple subjects in English such as social studies and science. Through the immersion program, children learn subjects that they're usually interested in in English . There're advantages considering you can acquire information and knowledge other than English. In Korea, the immersion program has been running in mostly private elementary schools and international middle and high schools and so on. In private institutes, they have collaborated with with foreign publishing companies. As a great example, an education institute, The Education, is working together with Scholastic, which is one of the biggest publishing companies for children's books and published Harry potter and hunger games and so on. They're running English programs like this at 30 branches of private institutes nationwide. The class books of the English program The Education showed are not just about simple grammar or listening but about various subjects such as space science, society, history, economics and arts. Shane Armstrong, CEO of Scholastic, explained that kids don't use English books compiled by teachers, but they read books written by worldwide, well-known writers. Through it, they pick up vocabulary and expressions naturally and get a chance to consciously think about main points writers want to talk about.

밑에는 선생님이 글을 체크한 다음에 이렇게 고쳐주셨어요ㅠㅠ

문장 구조는 말할 것 도 없이 진짜 온 갖 단 복수와 관사는 다틀렸어요

나중에 시간이 지난 다음에 이 글을 보면 이불을 발로 뻥뻥 찰 것 같네요...^^ㅠㅠ

다음 번엔 좀 더 나은글로 갖고 오도록 해야겠어요

조금씩 나아지겠죠!