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| 작 성 일 | 18-10-19 17:58 | 작 성 자 | sdasad | 조 회 | 2,801 | |
나눠져서 점수를 받게 되요
이 시험 뿐 아니라 일주일에 한 번씩 작문을 하는 숙제가 있는데 이 숙제로도 점수가 매겨져요
매주 배우는 주제가 있는데 법, 환경, 문화 등등 이런 것에 관해서 한글을 주면 영어로 번역하는 거에요
한글로도 쉬운 내용이 아니라 한번 읽고 바로 이해하기 어려워요 ㅠㅠ
새로운 나라 이름, 기업 이름, 기본 배경, 상식이 가득차 있어야 한다고나 할까요?
ㅠㅠ 어렵지만, 못할정돈 아닙니다.
이걸 클라스에서 공유하는 구글 드라이브에 올리게 되는데, 선생님이 이걸 보고 첨삭을 해주십니다.
The second grade in middle school is known as "stormy period." Exemplary kid is rebellious without any reason and an emotional rollercoaster and dozes off. Parents are likely to have concerns after seeing children's those changes. All of a sudden, They feel children become lazy and impulsive.
Here is a reason. That's why teenagers' brain is "under construction."
That teens can't control themselves is relate to human brain's development.
Brain scientists suggest that adolescence is the time when brain's change totally happen.
While brain stem that responsible for breathing, heartbeat, regulation of body temperature and brain limbic system that is involved with emotion, rage, desire get active, It is the result from underdeveloped prefrontal lobe that controls those.
cerebral cortex grows with secondary sex characteristics, it is slower than physical development. It develops until you become 20 years old. Because of this pace difference, teens go through ‘stormy period.’ Their body is the same as adult’s, but ability to judge is not mature. In other word, teens’ brain is under construction until brain is totally mature.
The second grade in middle school is known as the "stormy period." An exemplary kid is rebellious without any reason, an emotional rollercoaster and dozes off. Parents are likely to have concerns after seeing those changes in children. All of a sudden, they feel children become lazy and impulsive.Here is the reason. That's because teenagers' brains are "under construction." The fact that teens can't control themselves is related to human brain's development. Brain scientists suggest that adolescence is the time when the brain's change totally happens. While the brain stem that is responsible for breathing, heartbeat, regulation of body temperature and the limbic system that is involved with emotion, rage, desire get active, the prefrontal lobe that controls those is underdeveloped. Cerebral cortex grows with secondary sex characteristics, and so it is slower than physical development. It develops until you become 20 years old. Because of this pace difference, teens go through the ‘stormy period.’ Their body is the same as adult’s, but their ability to judge is not mature. In other words, teens’ brains are under construction until the brain is totally mature.
청소년기 특성에 대해서 쓴건데 위에가 제가 쓴거 밑에가 첨삭받은거에요
관사, 시제, 너무 직접적인 번역에 문제가 많았네요
확실히 약점을 아는데 정말 도움이 많이 되요~
