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The percentage of boys who took part in soccer was 17%.
The proportion of males who enjoyed going skateboarding was 11%.
The percentage of females who liked to dance was 27%.
The percentage of girls who participated in netball was 15%.
The percentage of girls who did gymnastics was 11%.
Eleven percent of girls were interested in gymnastics.
Twenty-seven percent of females participated in dancing.
Thirty-four percent of boys enjoyed computer games.
Seventeen percent of males played soccer.
Eleven percent of boys took part in skateboarding.
Comparitive patterns:
while/whereas
Compared to/with
As opposed to¡¦
While the percentage of boys who played computer games was 34%, 16% of girls did so.
Whereas the percentage of girls who preferred to read was 21%, merely/a mere/only/just 2% of boys did so.
The percentage of boys and girls who enjoyed listening to music was the same, with 10%.
The percentage of boys who enjoyed listening to music was 10% and the same proportion of girls did so.
Thirty-four percent of boys played computer games as opposed to / compared with 16% of girls.
Two percent of boys preferred reading as opposed to 21% of girls.
Compared with a mere 2% of boys, 21% of girls preferred reading.
Twenty-one percent of girls enjoyed reading whereas merely 2% of boys did so.